Talk:Chatterbox (restaurant)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 16:32, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've fallen behind my personal goal of reviewing two nominations for each of my own, so I'd be glad to look over this one. An anonymous username, not my real name 16:32, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

~~Extreme similarities to this, according to Earwig (rather odd because the DYK reviewer found no copyvios). Unless I'm missing something, this could probably be grounds for immediate failing.~~ The other thing was published later, so forget this.
Spot checks for accuracy found no problems.
No stability issues.
You could link "executive chef" in the lead.

Done

It also wouldn't hurt to switch the word "earliest" for "first" in that sentence.

Done

Images are good.
"Coconut ice cream" shouldn't all be linked, to prevent confusion. Since ice cream is the actual dish, with coconut as a flavour, it might be best to just link the former.

Done

Say "American archtiect" instead of "Hawaiian architect", as it is customary to refer to individuals by nationality.

Done

Is there any particular reason why T. Phadoemchit's first name isn't spelled out?

That's his byline.

A few citations for newspapers are unlinked, so if you find them online, linking would help.

The National Library of Singapore has a specific clause against hyperlinking their articles in their terms of use, so I thought I'd just leave them unlinked to respect that. Kingoflettuce (talk) 20:15, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

If you simply meant linking to their respective Wikipedia articles, then those don't exist at the moment. Kingoflettuce (talk) 20:17, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All in all good coverage.

I will put this on hold, ~~but if there actually are copyright issues, they need to be addressed as soon as possible.~~An anonymous username, not my real name 17:04, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the speedy review! I have addressed all that I think can be addressed. By the way, I would never, ever engage in copyvio! :) Kingoflettuce (talk) 20:15, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies for the accusation, ha-ha. It looks good now, so I'm passing it. An anonymous username, not my real name 20:31, 20 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]