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  • Comment: What a wonderful draft! Kudos for that. However, currently the article focuses too much on the details of formation and activities of the clubs. Criticism is also mentioned, but not duly. Could provide some more criticism or drawbacks of these clubs, or the negative/positive effects they've had? There are some such mentioning, but more of that sort is preferred for making the article more balanced. You can ping me or leave a message at my talk page once you're done.
    Thank you. X (talk) 04:05, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]