Talk:Charles Veley

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Unclear verbiage

"He has visited over 600 countries, territories, and other destinations." This wording is a bit clumsy, both since there are far fewer than 600 countries in the world, and since the article goes on to state that Veley has visited all countries on earth.

I am changing the wording to try and make it more clear. --Cantseetheforest (talk) 21:51, 22 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Furthermore, the article goes on to state that Veley has visited 710 locations, rendering the quantity "over 600" of an uncertain function. I simply removed the entire sentence in question. --Cantseetheforest (talk) 21:54, 22 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Not to be insanely picky, but I am also slightly changing the opening sentence in the interest of good prose. " . . . is an American man" is not a very meaningful predication. --Cantseetheforest (talk) 21:57, 22 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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