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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:46, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
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- "produce lumber. Mears" link lumber first time.
Done
- " to ship his" transport.
Done
- "18 miles" convert.
Done
- "canals, canal locks, control" -> "canals, their locks, control"
Done
- "the Farmer's Map of Michigan, and" is this a notable map?
Done = expanded on this.
- "lumber camp. The camp " shade repetitive.
Done
- "1861 depiction of.." avoid starting with a numeral.
Done
- "near Ludington) renamed" overlinked.
Done
- ISBNs ought to be formatted consistently.
Done
- This is in good condition, not too much to address. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:07, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for review. Will start working on this after breakfast.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:48, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:37, 31 August 2021 (UTC)