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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:51, 4 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "environmental test chambers" link?
  •  Done


  • "aircraft and aerospace industries. His test chambers were also used by the commercial industry" sort of saying the same thing, so merge.
  •  Done


  • "National Aeronautic and Space Administration" fewer people recognise this than NASA, so stick with the common name.
  •  Done


  • "formal schooling is as a " he's dead, right?
  •  Done


  • "Conrad's parents were James and Ella. He was born " perhaps Conrad was born to parents James and Ella in..."?
  •  Done



  • "in 1935.[3] From 1935" repetitive.
  •  Done


  • "courses to learn refrigeration" learn about?
  •  Done


  • "Conrad's first career job was in 1937. During this time Conrad" merge.
  •  Done


  • "over three hundred dollars" more than $300, and inflate.
  •  Done


  • "Conrad got involved" became rather than got?
  •  Done


  • "-125 degrees Fahrenheit" use convert template and a minus sign rather than a hyphen.
  •  Done


  • " extreme temperature environmental chambers" link env test chambers first time.
  •  Done


  • "the National Aeronautic and Space Administration. The" NASA again.
  •  Done


  • "Conrad, Inc and" Inc.
  •  Done


  • "60,000 square feet" convert.
  •  Done


  • "I.B.M., I T & T," aren't these normally IBM and IT&T? Could link them.
  •  Done


  • "and Project Apollo national" -> "and the Apollo program"
  •  Done


  • "chambers did cooling or heating" chambers cooled or heated.
  •  Done


  • "- 100 degrees Fahrenheit" minus signs here and on the conversion.
  •  Done


  • Link Xerox.
  •  Done


  • And Eastman Kodak.
  •  Done


  • "SS Badger" ->"SS Badger" in caption.
  •  Done


  • "three ships called SS Badger, SS Spartan and SS City of Midland 41 from" -> "three ships, SS Badger, SS Spartan and SS City of Midland 41, from"
  •  Done


  • ""enterprise LMC Lake Michigan Car Ferry Service" why italics? It wasn't before.
  •  Done


  • ".[16][A][17] " I would put footnote then refs.
  •  Done


  • "The S.S. Badger is claimed" -> "SS Badger"
  •  Done


  • "Michigan Great Lakes" link.
  •  Done


  • "four hundred feet long" 400 feet and convert.
  •  Done


  • " It does almost 500 crossings" it makes.
  •  Done


  • "six hundred passengers and just under two hundred vehicles (motorcycles, automobiles, RVs, trucks) on" 600, 200. And it looks like it's not a rail

ferry...!

  •  Done Correct = Conrad converted the train ship SS Badger in 1992 to an auto ferry


  • "in the morning of February" just "on February" will do.
  •  Done


  • "from 1995 on" no "on" needed.
  •  Done


That's it on a first run. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:09, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for review. I'll start on it right after my nap. zzzzzzzzzzzzz --Doug Coldwell (talk) 16:12, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --20:17, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]