Talk:Chad at the 2004 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Yellow Dingo (talk · contribs) 03:17, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
Taking, will do soon. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 03:17, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]- "athletes:" → "athletes;"
- "of competition" → "of her competition"
- Move the "In 1980, Chad joined with the United States led boycott over the 1979 invasion of Afghanistan during the Soviet–Afghan War." sentence up one paragraph so it is directly after the other boycott- related info.
- "No Chadian has ever won a medal at an Olympics." - add an "as of 2016"
- "The Chadian team for the 2004 Summer Olympics in Athens" - unlink Athens as it is already linked in the section
- Fix the dashes
- "semi finals" → "semi-finals" - consistency with lead
Overall
[edit]Nice article, putting on hold. — Yellow Dingo (talk) 08:36, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Yellow Dingo: Thanks for reviewing, I've fixed those issues. I did more of a trim where I double linked Athens, as I saw that I'd also double linked the 2004 Games. I also made the number of athletes and medals as of 2004 rather than 2016, as that way it's relevant to this article (and so that lazy old me doesn't have to try to remember to update it when Chad wins a medal 15 years down the line!!). Miyagawa (talk) 09:07, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
- Ok, passing. Congrats! — Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:09, 5 November 2016 (UTC)