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GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • Add alt text to every image being used.
  • Remove the comma after "900 residential units".
  • Add a hyphen between "one third".
  • Add an "a" before "single window".
  • Remove the comma after "on the third floor".
  • "A reinforced concrete" - is the "a" necessary?
  • "superstructure is used" → "superstructure ars used"
  • "rise the height" - typo for "raise"?
  • "Extell announced it were" → "Extell announced it was"
  • "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
  • "which would" → "that would"
  • Wikilink Michael Kimmelman, Robin Pogrebin, and Azi Paybarah.

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have done all of these now. Regarding rise - I meant that the stairs extend the tower's full height, so I reworded it. Epicgenius (talk) 05:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]