Jump to content

Talk:Cathy Linh Che

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

[edit]

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jada Jones. Peer reviewers: Kdd038.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:44, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review. Krystal Dabney

[edit]

The article does provide a lot of information, but I feel it can be more organized. You should include the starting information that is speaking about her background, under a headline that could simply say: Early life or Early life and influences. This way the reader just won't see a big block of information, I also suggest having a directory panel, so the reader can click on what they want to learn and that can immediately take them to the information they want to know.

I also suggest of moving the first sentence of the first paragraph of information. And making it a small snippet instead, that way it can lead to the poet's biography, I also suggest uploading a picture of the poet to go along with the information you provided. This will give the reader a face to put the background information to, and know what the reader looks like. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kdd038 (talkcontribs) 01:05, 30 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]