Talk:Carry Me in Your Dreams/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:28, 10 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

Alt has to be more descriptive than that, as its an alternative descprition of the cover.
The german source also claims the track is an "electronic disco song" → genre

Lead

Kejsi Tola. It was independently released as a single → Kejsi Tola, independently released as a single
The song → It
English-language up-tempo electronic French pop-inspired song → see below for the changes according to the compostion section
with the song's Albanian-language version → with the Albanian-language version
she was accompanied → and was accompanied

Background and composition

Unwikilink up-tempo + uptempo
French pop → 70's french pop (stick to the source)
Musically, the latter is an English-language up-tempo electronic French pop-inspired song that incorporates folk elements.[1][3][4] → Musically, the latter is an English-language uptempo electronic and disco song.[1][3] It was inspired by the 70's french pop and incorporates folk elements.[4]
This section can and should contain more information regarding its instrumentation, voice of the singer and much more. Source 3 and 4 are quite compreenshive on that matter. Such as "schlager rhythms and key change" and "psychedelic turbo-folk production ", among other instances

Release and promotion

premiered prior to the start of the Eurovision Song Contest 2009 → be more specific regarding the date

Festivali i Këngës

which included Tola being chosen to represent the country in the contest, after gathering the maximal votes from a expert jury of 126 points. → . Tola was chosen to represent the country in the contest, after gathering the maximum votes, 126 points, from an expert jury.

Moscow

Fine

Track listing

Fine

Release history

Fine

References

Fine

Overall

Critical reception?

You should mention Borislava and Costa from the same review. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:20, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Done.--Lorik17 (talk) 19:37, 15 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The sources for the single release only have the year, no month or date?

The 1 January 2008 is displayed on the iTunes App on the Phone .. Let me know if its not suitable to use the date.--Lorik17 (talk) 17:06, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You have to provide me the source that has that date. Can't you find it anywhere else? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:11, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Unfortunately, it is only visible on Phone but i can remove "1 January"?--Lorik17 (talk) 17:15, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You have to. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:20, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:29, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I made the changes you've requested. I also added a Critical reception section--Lorik17 (talk) 17:06, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]