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a lot of good information in the career section, but more needs to be added to every other section as well. Maybe could add another section about early life as well, I know that some people are always interested in what the person they are reading about did before they became a well known archaeologist in this context.
The career and scientific contribution sections are fantastic. The only thing I would say is that it would be nice to have some specifics for what fieldwork she has done rather than just saying that she has experience. However, you have done this well when considering the scientific contributions section.
Regarding education - what levels were studied at each university?
In the opening section, since you first introduce Bird as an archaeologist, perhaps consider putting her specifically archaeological interests first rather than last.
Were you able to contact the author? Getting some biographical information might be a bonus here.
Otherwise, it's going well. Excellent formatting and ease of reading.
Puigr88 (talk) 00:35, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Every required section has been well identified within the context of your wikipedia article. The sections are logically laid out and present concise information on the female archaeologist. A comment that could be made is divulging a little deeper into the specific publications and excavations with more detail. Rather than just a heading that stated "scientific contributions", a section with the heading of a well-known excavation or publication may stimulate more interest in the said topic.
The article so far is very well-rounded, but more intriguing headers and sections may be a nice improvement.
Natalieandrewski (talk) 07:55, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Natalie Natalieandrewski (talk) 07:55, 2 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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