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GA Review

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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 11:04, 9 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

First reading

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  • The lead should provide a summary of what is found in the body of the text. Currently it includes information not mentioned elsewhere and misses out things that should be included.
  • You need references for the vernacular names.
  • Some paragraphs do not contain any references.
  • "The connection with snow is obscure, but might have been suggested by discoloration of the first preserved specimens received by taxonomists in Europe." - This statement sounds like OR and needs a source.
  • " Linnaeus first described Naja nivea in 1758." - Repetition.
  • In the Biology section, you need to either use the plural or the singular, and not keep changing between the two.
  • "The preferred habitat of the species is fynbos, bushveld, karoo scrubland, arid savanna, the Namib desert and the Kalahari desert." - You can't just change from types of habitat to the two deserts in this sentence.
  • "... robbing the nests of the Sociable Weaver." - This behaviour is mentioned twice.
  • Some information in the Venom section needs citations.

Criteria

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1. Well written?:

Prose quality: - The prose needs some attention. Variation in the use of plural and singular. (The snake, it, they etc.)
Manual of Style compliance: - The lead needs expansion and some parts of the lead are not included in other parts of the text.

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources: - Further citations needed.
Citations to reliable sources: - The sources used appear reliable
No original research: - Possibly

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects: -
Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. :

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail: - No attempt has been made to improve the article in the ten days since I started this review. It needs more work as outlined above to bring it to GA standard. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:31, 19 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]