Talk:Can't Be Tamed (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:00, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
Very good job, not many things to fix at all:
- Throughout the article you use "Cyrus's", apostrophes after words ending in 's' don't need another 's' - ie just write "Cyrus'"
Background
[edit]- Source for writers/producers?
- Done CD added. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 21:00, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
Critical reception
[edit]- "...that always helps.", McAlpine concluded. - remove full stop
- Done
- Link 'Disney'
- Done
Music video
[edit]- Link 'choreographed'
- Done
- "she didn't want them to wear scales and look too fish-like or too wear bird feet and look too scary." - rewrite
- Done
- why do you link 'avis' (esp to a non-existent page)?
- Done
- 'Video reception' section should simply be 'Reception'
- Done
Track listings
[edit]- Sources?
- Many GAs and FAs don't have sources for the track listings. I don't think this should be an exception. Do you really, really want it? -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 21:11, 21 November 2010 (UTC)
- I don't see why not. It doesn't detract anything from the article. I'll let it slide, but I strongly recommend that you add cites. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:25, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
Stability
[edit]- There seems to be a bit of IP vandalism. Have you thought about requesting semi-protection?
- Declined – Not enough recent disruptive activity to justify protection. per WP:GA? vandalism is not a GA impediment. TbhotchTalk C. 04:12, 15 November 2010 (UTC)
- OK, just a suggestion... Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:09, 15 November 2010 (UTC)
Media
[edit]- File:Miley cyrus cant be tamed single.ogg needs to be reduced in quality
I'll place the review on hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:26, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
- Apart from the track listing sources, everything has been addressed, so I am happy to pass it now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:26, 22 November 2010 (UTC)