Talk:Can't B Good/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 13:57, 5 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I'll review this article shortly! Simon (talk) 13:57, 5 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"...as the fourth and final single from Discipline, on March 18, 2008" --> remove the comma
"... who deemed it for being smooth, tender and lovely" --> I'd prefer "praised"
"...picking the song" --> and picked

Background and composition

"Even though not writing by herself" --> Although Jackson didn't write the song
"...R&B "smooth and jazzy" ballad" --> "smooth and jazzy" before R&B
"Janet Jackson" --> Once you mentioned the full name you should only mention the last name consequently

Reception

" Allmusic" is now "AllMusic"
Unitalicized BBC Music
"...but due to its lack of melody, failed to do so" --> but failed to do so due to...
I can see that you use to much "of", replace them with "writing for", "from"... or something else

Remix, charts, credits

Fine

Source review

Ref #1 should be AllMusic, not Allmusic, and the publisher is All Media Network
Ref #9 unitalicized Digital Spy
Ref #16 unitalicized BBC News
Refs #17 and #18 are not employ with the other refs' dates. Fix it

Overall

On hold Simon (talk) 14:13, 5 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done Alex ^{talk page!} 04:20, 6 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Simon (talk) 09:00, 6 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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