Talk:Campus of Kyushu University
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[edit]It is still under debate. Mr. Michitaro recommends Campus ... and Building... We must discuss it. Please DAFJ refrein from vandalism. wait a moment.See User talk:Hot cake syrup. --Hot cake syrup (talk) 13:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- No need to wait - take it to Wikipedia:Requested moves and make a formal move request if you think you have a case, but please refrain from attempting cut & paste moves. --DAJF (talk) 13:40, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
References
[edit]Entertained doubts about 九州大学大学文書館(編) 2011『九州大学百年史写真集1911-2011 One hundred Years of Kyushu University』(九州大学百周年記念事業委員会), but it is a reliable credible information, because it is official report by Kyushu University.--Hot cake syrup (talk) 02:55, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- I don't think anyone is "entertaining doubts" about the reference source(s) you quote; the problem is that many of the statements in the article are pretty much incomprehensible to this particular native English speaker, which is why I tagged them as requiring clarification. Perhaps you could explain in more understandable English what phrases like "the first ~ third state bldg", "there are purchase department of COOP and commons", and "construction control" are supposed to mean? Unfortunately, the fact that you still don't appear to appreciate the problem suggests to me that you may not be sufficiently competent to edit on English Wikipedia, and would be better off contributing to a Wikipedia project in your own native language. --DAJF (talk) 03:07, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
Please cleanup
[edit]The article needs some major cleanup. It looks more like a list of buildings from each of the campuses, rather than a description of the campuses themselves and their major features. The square footage should only be specified if the building is particularly noteworthy (largest building on campus or of all schools in the area). Much of the article should be rewritten in prose. If buildings can be grouped by departments, that would be helpful too. Names of buildings should not be bolded. Also any history regarding the development, and location of the campuses belongs here. If the names have Japanese translations you can use Nihongo templates. -AngusWOOF (talk) 19:20, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
- Regarding the building names, if you want to subsection the campus by its clusters of buildings, and place its history and contents there, that would be fine. Landmarks can be subsectioned. Libraries, on-campus housing, sports facilities (gym, tennis court, pool) be condensed. -AngusWOOF (talk) 19:35, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
Hi AngusWOOF. I should like to thank you for your useful proposals, and to adopt some of your advices，and improve sequentially on forward, thanks you.--Hot cake syrup (talk) 13:23, 20 March 2013 (UTC)
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