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Assessment comment

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The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Cameron Winslow/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.

ARTICLE STRENGTHS:
  • It's a very good start to the article, and features some pertinant information. As mentioned on the mil-hist assessment, it's got some supporting materials, such as an infobox.

ARTICLE WEAKNESSESS

  • There's a big problem with the references. It cites only one source, and it isn't one that we can easily check.

  • It has no defined structure, as there only seems to be a conglomerate of information

SUGGESTIONS

  • Flesh out the infobox, a picture would be nice.

  • find some more references and sources.

Cam 03:27, 31 May 2007 (UTC)

Last edited at 03:27, 31 May 2007 (UTC). Substituted at 10:46, 29 April 2016 (UTC)