Talk:CMLL World Lightweight Championship/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
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Lead
[edit]- (Campeonato Mundial de Peso Ligero del CMLL in Spanish) - rewrite as (Spanish: Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL)
- Fixed
- "who won the it on February 27. 1999." - remove "the"
- Fixed
- "Dragon Lee is the 15th overall champion and is a two-time champion." - reptition of champion
- Fixed
Background
[edit]- "In 1999 CMLL began to tour Japan, promoting a series of wrestling shows under the name "CMLL Japan", featuring shows that were a mixture of CMLL wrestlers and native Japanese wrestlers on their shows." - better In 1999 CMLL began to tour Japan, promoting a series of wrestling shows under the name "CMLL Japan". The shows featured a mixture of CMLL and native Japanese wrestlers.
- Fixed
- "The championship was abandoned by the end of 2000 as CMLL abandoned future plans to promote shows in Japan." - The word discontinued would be ideal to replace the first mention of abandoned.
- Fixed
- "was only made public as they promoted a rematch between Williams and Romero." - when
- Fixed
- "During Virus' run as champion the belt was reclassified from "Super Lightweight" to "Lightweight"." - needs a citation
- So looking at the sources once more I found out that it was actually reclasified shortly before Virus won it, updated the article to refect this.
Reigns
[edit]- "Virus holds the record for most reigns, 4;" 4 needs to be spelt out
- Fixed
These are the points I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 13:16, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- All done. MPJ-DK 21:30, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:30, 23 August 2016 (UTC)