Talk:C. O. Brocato/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:25, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

I copyedited the article here, let me know if you disagree with any of the changes.
I have some WP:OVERLINK concerns, like baseball and captain
There are duplicate links in the body of the article (baseball, captain, and senior)
Ref spot checks: 2, 4, 8, 12, 13, 15, 24, 26, 30, 34, 35, 38, 50, 53, 57, 60, 64

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:47, 1 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: Your copyedits look fine. As for the overlink part, I delinked baseball, but captain I still think might be worth linking (I believe I've seen users asked to do so at FA before, but I could still change it if you want). BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:31, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:24, 5 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.