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The result was: promoted by CSJJ104 (talk18:45, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Buford Dam, showing the steep slope of grass
Buford Dam, showing the steep slope of grass

Created by Aoidh (talk). Self-nominated at 00:49, 20 August 2022 (UTC).[reply]

  • Hi Aoidh, review follows: article created 19 August and exceeds minimum length; I made a small number of edits to to the prose to improve readability, please review and change if I made any errors; sources look OK for the subject matter; article is cited inline throughout; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing from the sources; hook is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; image is used in the article and freely licensed; A QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 06:37, 20 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Aoidh: Some punchier hooks :)
    • ALT0a: ... that sixteen goats help maintain the Buford Dam?
    • ALT0b: ... that the "Chew Crew" of the Buford Dam consists of sixteen goats?
    • ALT0c: ... that the Buford Dam is maintained in part by a "Chew Crew" of sixteen goats?
  • Sorry if you find them baa-a-a-ad! (cheesy, i know...) theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (she/her) 09:42, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I don't mind at all, I like them all. I really like the goats aspect of the dam and I thought it'd make a good hook, the wording itself doesn't matter. I do like ALT0c. - Aoidh (talk) 23:40, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]