Talk:Brown carbon
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Peer Review
[edit]Hi, I believe that this is a new article and not edits to an existing one. It seems that it is still a little bare, so I think it might be more helpful for me to complete the peer review when it is a little further along and has more sources. I just figure this way I will be able to give more feedback. I'll check back in a couple days. Pws97 (talk) 19:00, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
Since you have not replied and there does not seem to have been much change with the page, will will go ahead and give quick peer review. The article never defines what brown carbon is; it appears it begins to but did not finish. One of the first things I notice is there is only one source, so I would suggest doing more research and add additional sources before moving this page. The blank sections also need to be filled in or removed before moving the page. The most important thing to do first should be to add the definition of brown carbon, as after reading what is in the article so far it is still not clear to me. The section "black and brown carbon mix" begins with "As a result..." but it would be better to start the section in a more stand-alone manner. This section is the most complete, but should still be revised to remove phrases like "this is because." Overall, the topic seems potentially interesting, but the article itself needs a lot of work. Pws97 (talk) 21:06, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
Fixed associated issues
[edit]I fixed all the issues you pointed out and added a lot more info, thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gryffinpuff (talk • contribs) 22:21, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
Carbon
[edit]What is potential of black or brown carbon in UV light? 122.162.147.141 (talk) 04:13, 8 March 2022 (UTC)