Talk:Brazil at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 18:03, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
Will start review now.--Dom497 (talk) 18:03, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- "Their best performance..." - Replace with something like "The country's best performance..." or "The nation's best performance..."
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
Background
[edit]- Looks good!
Disability classification
[edit]- See discussion here. In other words, nomination will be on hold for a couple days but will not be stopped until consensus is reached.
Alpine skiing
[edit]- "Only the two best runs for each rider counted, and his combined time was two minutes and forty-two seconds, earning him 28th place out of 33 competitors." - Use numbers for times since it is easier to read. Also reword the end of the sentence to: "...placing 28th out of 33 competitors."
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:36, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- What was Andre Pereira's classification?
- Classifications were not used for snowboard cross, all the standing athletes participated in one pool, without time adjustments for classification. Courcelles (talk) 18:36, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
Cross-country skiing
[edit]- "Athletes classified LW12 had..." --> "Athletes classified as LW12 had..."
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- Random comment: I never knew the Paralympics were so complicated in terms of classifications and timings.
- Some sports are, some aren't. Cross-country is one of the more complicated. Don't even get me started on the relays they introduced in Peyongchang... Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- "...this placed him 15th out of 21 competitors, and over 8 minutes behind the winning time of 40 minutes and 51 seconds" --> "...placing him 15th out of 21 competitors, and over 8 minutes behind the winning time of 40 minutes and 51 seconds."
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- "and Rocha was eliminated" - This is implied so it is not needed.
- You're right. Gone.
Men's sprint
[edit]- In the "Final" he is ranked 20th. How can be ranked 20th in the Final if he didn't qualify for it?
- Oops, fixed. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Please make sure the date formatting is consistent between the formatting used in the text and references (for example, ref 1 is formatted differently than the others)
- Oops, that was the one reference in the article as I found it, and I just plum missed the formatting. Courcelles (talk) 18:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
On hold.--Dom497 (talk) 18:33, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- Dom497, that's everything addressed! Thanks for the reviews! Courcelles (talk) 18:42, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
- I'm just going to pass this since it doesn't look like the discussion at the WikiProject will start or happen anytime soon.--Dom497 (talk) 14:38, 3 May 2018 (UTC)