Talk:Brad Harrison
| This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
 | This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||
| ||||||||
Improving the article
[edit]Editor Bradleycharrison (talk · contribs) has removed the tags from the "multiple issues" and has requested feedback on improving the article.
I have edited the "Early life and education" section to indicate the kinds of improvement that are still needed:
- I have added "[citation needed]" tags to statements that have no source; see WP:V.
- I have removed an unsourced claim that his military career was "successful". It may well have been, but without a reliable source to confirm this, the article should not say so.
- I have removed the flowery language that he "was fortunate enough to work with" various people; see WP:TONE.
- I have removed unnecessary links to external websites. Just because an article mentions organisation XYZ, that doesn't mean it should include a link to XYZ's home page. See this guideline.
- I have added "[failed verification]" to a URL that seemed to be used as a source for one of the statements, but in fact leads to a page that does not mention Brad Harrison anywhere.
The rest of the article needs just as much work as this section. -- John of Reading (talk) 16:24, 7 September 2013 (UTC)