Talk:Brachychiton rupestris/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AmaryllisGardener (talk · contribs) 00:25, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Notes

Quite impressive! Nice work! I would recommend expanding the "Ecology" section, if possible, and add the "30em" parameter to the reflist if you want it to be featured, though. I for one was certainly not left wanting. Keep up the good work you two! :) --AmaryllisGardener ^talk 00:35, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

thanks for the review! ecology stuff has been hard to find. Will try some more oblique ways for hunting down material as FAC is where we're heading....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:56, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! Good luck on getting it to FA, it's certainly on the right path! :) --AmaryllisGardener ^talk 02:59, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Just as a quick note (and I certainly don't dispute Amaryllis's review!) for pre-FAC preparation, I'd recommend taking another look at the lead (it doesn't quite grab the reader in the way some do) and be aware of jargon (including, but not limited to, the description section). J Milburn (talk) 12:29, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

thanks - I have had a bit of a go at rejigging lead. Ecology matieral is proving tricky to find... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:04, 5 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]