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Add: Rexroth creates its power of innovation from its constantly-developed knowledge and industrial experience that dates back more than 200 years. Robert Bosch GmbH has its origins in the year 1886 – the history of Rexroth goes back to the year 1795. In 2001, Bosch Automationstechnik and Mannesmann Rexroth AG were merged to form Bosch Rexroth AG. And maybe include some of this history: http://www.boschrexroth-us.com/country_units/america/united_states/en/about_us/history/index.jsp

I'll add this information soon, but it will be in more neutral language per the neutral point of view policy. nadav 22:12, 17 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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BRL is not Bosch Bosch Rexroth so I would suggest:
BRL, Bosch Rexroth Linear Motion and Assembly Technologies is part of the Bosch Rexroth group; which is part of Robert Bosch GmbH. Besides BRL Bosch Rexroth is devided in Electric Drives and Controls (BRC), Hydraulics (BRH), Pneumatics (BRP) and Service

The problem is that the parent company Bosch and its subsidiary Bosch Rexroth need more attention on Wikipedia before we can devote time to the smaller subunits and subsidiaries. Please help expand this article and Robert Bosch GmbH first. We can also use your expertise at the articles on the different product types, eg machine tools, say. Thanks -nadav 21:05, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Ok I will, first I will start more information about Aluminum Structural Framing... —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 209.221.240.48 (talk) 12:30, 27 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]
Excellent, thanks! nadav 13:29, 27 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Please add that BR(L) (Bosch Rexroth Linear Motion and Assembly Technologies)also produces Aluminum Framing
I added the Aluminum Framing, but at the moment I noticed that it's infriging with the copy rights or something? Just re-writing the page will do the job?

As can be seen on the article page, this only includes secondary information. Articles and other relevant materials are used to give a general and neutral overview of Bosch Rexroth Linear Motion and Assembly Technologies. Since Bosch Rexroth has several unique products and services it will contribute to creating a full understanding of Linear Motion and Assembly technologies for wikipedians.

How about you start with that last part, instead of with the page of your own company. Please see our guidelines on self promotion and conflicts of interest. --TheDJ (talkcontribsWikiProject Television) 15:11, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Starting with the company overview will create a better insight into the operations of this worldwide technological advanced company and its unique products, which will create a better understanding of this Industrial world. Besides that it is a completely neutral wiki since the information resources used are written by reliable secondary resources. Aluminum Framing as you mentioned can be put in a seperate Wiki, because it is worthy to put more emphasis on this topic since it will serve the Wiki community with reliable information to contribute to the knowledge of wikipedians about this topic. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 209.221.240.48 (talk) 15:23, 26 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]
I am busy with reviewing the complete document, still as can be seen in the article, every piece of information is written by a third party (secondary neutral resource). —The preceding unsigned comment was added by BoschRexroth-us (talkcontribs) 15:56, 26 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]

Question: Which part is not written in neutral language? Besides that I want to know if I have to refer in the Aluminum Framing part to the source (it's already mentioned in the External Resources)?

That's not the biggest problem (it doesn't help of course). The biggest problem is that people feel that the subject is not notable enough i think. It's a bussiness unit of a company. Which is simply not a good starting point for an article. Write about the parent company, or the product (if it's REALLY very notable). I think people will appreciate such articles a lot more then another commercial entity article. --TheDJ (talkcontribsWikiProject Television) 16:08, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Question to TheDJ - I know it's a business Unit of a company, though as you maybe know Bosch Rexroth is well establish international company with a wide range of products in different industries. Describing the company as a whole is possible, though it won't be possible to fit everything into one Wiki page... Also I have seen pages of other companies which include information about their company, which were not written by a neutral party, what about those companies? Besides all of this, it is possible to cover that article about Aluminum Framing on a wiki page, right? Thanks, Rob.

Hello. Perhaps you can incorporate some of this information into Robert Bosch GmbH? Regarding aluminum framing, I suppose that can be created as a separate article aluminum framing or else merged into an article like Prefabricated home. nadav 18:02, 26 April 2007 (UTC) There are also various articles at Structural system that may be the right home for information you feel should be kept. nadav 18:21, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Bosch Rexroth is a 100% subsidairy of Robert Bosch GmbH. So Rexroth has a different kind of history. Linear Motion and Assembly Technology is a division within Bosch Rexroth. As can be seen on their website, it is a company with a wide variation of products in many industries. This article (which will be expand over time) will contribute to a better understanding of these (unique) technologies for interested wikipedians. By explaining the products and their functions people will be able to develop their knowledge about Linear Motion and Assembly Technologies.
Aluminum Structural Framing is something different from Structural system, so probably it is a good idea to develop a new page for this article which would make a good contribution to the Wiki pages. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by BoschRexroth-us (talkcontribs) 18:32, 26 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]