Talk:Bop Gun (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I am reviewing the article. Its an interesting article that conveys the flavor of the episode well. (I made a few copy edits which you are free to change.)
- My one complaint is that per WP:LEAD, I think the lead could be beefed up more to reflect the contents of the article, including some indication of its ratings. (What were the high ratings attibuted to?)
- I took a shot at this. Let me know if it's better. Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 14:30, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Xtzou (Talk) 14:00, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Yes, it is fine. Xtzou (Talk) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review (see here for criteria)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- I made a few minor wording and punctuation changes.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Article is well sourced, with no original research.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- The article remains focused on the subject while covering the relevant areas.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- NPOV
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall: A wonderful, concise article
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Congratulations! A fine article. Xtzou (Talk) 14:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)