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GA Review

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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 01:30, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here's my review:

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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Gave this a few copy edits. Here are my comments:

  • The two alternative names are significant enough to be in boldface, per WP:BOLDTITLE.
  • Expand the lead a little to include information about the inventor, the year it was invented, etc.
  • "Unnecessarily elaborate": not sure if that's neutral.
  • Per WP:MINREF, include a citation after the direct quotation after "... tormented by gout".
  • Would recommend using {{Commons category}} instead of having the gallery, per WP:IG.
  • dupdet didn't turn up anything, so that's good.

Short and sweet: nice work. On hold for a fortnight. 23W 02:07, 26 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Made edits per your suggestions, thanks for your review! The only one I did not make was the "unnecessarily elaborate" change, as it is my understanding that that is a well-attested and uncontroversial claim about the bookwheel. See for instance this page which discusses "design for showmanship's sake" with additional sourced statements. Geethree (talk) 01:27, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Geethree: I see. Changes look good, looks like I'll pass. 23W 01:33, 27 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]