Talk:Bob Vaughn/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• Added the offensive guards, high school baseball and football coaches cats
• Change guard in lead and infobox to offensive guard
  • Changed.
• I assume you couldn't find any college stats for this lineman?
  • Wasn't able to.
• "He signed his rookie contract on June 13" Article said it was the day before
  • Fixed.
• Is source 18 locked? I was trying to verify the date he was waived.
  • Its from the paywalled NewspaperArchive.com - its available through the Wikipedia Library here but I didn't include that link as only Wikipedians can access it.

That's all I think WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 04:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:09, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2023 (UTC)