Talk:Blohm & Voss BV 40/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 11:28, 19 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 14:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Another interesting article from Sturmvogel 66 covering one of the unusual aircraft projects that seemed to proliferate at the end of the Second World War. I will start a review shortly. simongraham (talk) 14:40, 20 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Overall, the standard is high, meeting the Manual of Style guidelines for lead, layout and word choice..
It is of sufficient length, with 1,660 words of readable prose.
The lead is short, but reasonable given the length of the article, at 149 words.
77.7% of authorship is by Sturmvogel 66, with contributions from 35 other editors.
It is currently assessed as a C class article.
I have made some minor grammar fixes. Please check them and adjust if necessary.
I have also used the German for the name of the DLR.
In the lead, "6" is used rather than "six". I feel that it flows better that way given the subsequent "21", but highlight it in case you wish to make the change.
- The MoS says the same format should be used for like objects, so I used the numeral rather than spelling out 21.
  - Aesthetically, I feel that this is better so completely agree.
The image is public domain and tagged appropriately.
There are many volumes of Secret Projects of the Luftwaffe. Is it Volume 7 that is referred to here? There is mention of the aircraft in Volume 1 as well.
- They're not formally numbered. I used the latest one, which doesn't use the same title format as the earlier volumes. I have Wings, Profiles, and Projects of the early ones; which one are you referring to?
  - Interesting. Jet Fighters 1939-1945 is labelled Volume 1 on Google books.[[1]] Is there any material difference between this and the version you are using?
    - That's an expansion of the 2015 bookazine in hardback. It has two pages of info on the BV 40 while the 2023 bookazine has about 30 and corrects a few things found in the earlier book.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:29, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      - Thank you.
Spot checks confirm Mrazek 2011 and Nowarra 1993. Suggest adding a translated title to the latter.
- Good idea.

@Sturmvogel 66: Excellent work as usual. Please do take a look at my comments and ping me when you would like me to take another look. simongraham (talk) 14:46, 20 May 2024 (UTC) @Simongraham: Don't forget about the review for Basilisk.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:59, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you. I had not realised you had completed that. Please tell me when you are done here. simongraham (talk) 02:31, 24 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Simongraham: All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:29, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work. I believe that this article meets the criteria to be a Good Article.

Pass simongraham (talk) 21:18, 25 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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