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Hi! I really like your subject and the way you are explaining their mission because that seems like the one of the most important part. I would suggest adding bullet points to your list and explaining each of the different parts of their mission, such as for education explain what they are educating people on. I would also suggest explaining what a 501 c is, or linking it to another Wikipedia page. Also, maybe taking out the mission part in the first section because you have a full section later on. I really like your part on Dezie Woods, is there more about her? Is she the only president? Great job! I look forward to seeing the final product!
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This is good! I want to critique you on a few points. I agree that you should explain what a 501 c is or linking it to another page. Also, I would add more specifics on how this organization goes about giving women accessible healthcare. Add more specifics on all of your categories/ bullet points on how/what they do to improve criminal justice reform/economic security, etc. Next, I would give another sentence or two about Dezie Woods because she is clearly very essential to the formation of this group. Then, I would make a different section for each branch of operations: political advocacy and education. Lastly, I would add the reason why this group split from the Bay Area Women for Dellums; this will give background on what they as a group value most and what distinguishes them from other groups. This is really good! :) keep up the good work
Thank you for your comments Emma and Victoria! I have added more about Dezie Woods, linked to the 501 c page, and plan to add more background information about the Bay Area for Dellums. I appreciate all of your suggestions! :) Amartin19 (talk) 14:20, 29 March 2017 (UTC)[User:amartin19][reply]
