Talk:Bill Cole (musician)

Semi-protected edit request on 1 October 2016

ALL CAPS TO DISTINGUISH DIRECTIONS FROM EDIT TEXT.

TWO CONSERVATIVE EDITS PROPOSED..

1. FOLlOWING THE SENTENCE IN CAREER, ENDING 60 Minutes. ADD THE FOLLOWING REFERENCE.

<ref name=Walton10>{{cite book | author = Walton, Douglas | year = 2010 | title = The Place of Emotion in Argument | page = 177f | location = University Park, PA | publisher = Penn State University Press | isbn = 9780271040899 | url =  https://books.google.com/books?isbn=0271040890 | access-date = September 30, 2016}}</ref>

NOTE, THIS DOES NOT FIX THE NEED FOR THE TAG IN THE MIDDLE OF THE SENTENCE, WHICH SHOULD REMAIN IN PLACE.

2. AT THE APPROPRIATE PLACE IN THE ARTICLE, ADD THE FOLLOWING NEW SECTION:

Further reading

• Casey, John (February 26, 1989). "At Dartmouth, the Clash of '89". The New York Times. Retrieved September 30, 2016.
• Walton, Douglas (2010). The Place of Emotion in Argument. University Park, PA: Penn State University Press. p. 177f. ISBN 9780271040899. Retrieved September 30, 2016.

[THOSE TWO CITATIONS HAVE A WEALTH OF INFORMATION ON THE FACTS OF THE DARTMOUTH REVIEW CONTROVERSY, AND SO CAN BE USED AS SOURCES BY FUTURE EDITORS (AS WELL AS SERVING AS FURTHER READING RESOURCES FOR WIKIPEDIA READERS).]

73.211.138.148 (talk) 00:35, 1 October 2016 (UTC)

Possibly has become outdated. Couldn't find the sentence that ends in the string you specify. — Andy W. (talk · ctb) 05:57, 12 October 2016 (UTC)