Talk:Bhutan at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 11:17, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Grabbing this one for a review since I'm in an Olympics mood already. Seeing all the stuff on my Facebook history thread popping up from the London games has made me all nostalgic. Nom Comment: Same, can't wait.

I'd throw "Bhutan, along with Chad, was one of only two nations with only female athletes at the 2012 games" into the lead somewhere. I think it's very interesting and worthy of being highlighted properly. Done; and might take to DYK if this passes as well, as it is pretty interesting
"As of 2015, no Bhutanese athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics" - probably better off just keeping it up to date for the 2012 games, so instead say "Prior to the 2012 Summer Games, no Bhutanese athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics" Done
"The two athletes were accompanied by their coaches; Tshering Choden for Sherab Zam and Dorji Phurba for Kunzang Choden; as well as several Bhutan Olympic Committee officials" You can drop the first names of the two athletes from the sentence, as they're already mentioned elsewhere in the paragraph. Done
Can you throw something into the background section about the archery being held at Lords with a cite? Otherwise the information in the image caption is uncited. Added into "archery" section with cite
Image licences fine. Thanks

I think that'll be it. Placing it on hold for the obligatory seven days. Miyagawa (talk) 11:17, 3 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Miyagawa: Thanks for the review; I have addressed all your comments above. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 05:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Great, happy to promote now that's all completed. Miyagawa (talk) 08:30, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]