Talk:Bernard Mellor/GA1
GA Review
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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 20:21, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Hi! I know this is a more recent nomination but I haven't reviewed a biography before and I figure this one shouldn't take too long! ~Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Preliminary checks
[edit]- image copyright
- is it possible to use a fair use image in the infobox? I see the HKU site has one
- Earwig
- reasonably similar to the Independent source: For a period he worked under a deception unit headed by Peter Fleming
Infobox
[edit]- no comments besides missing an image (see above)
Prose
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[edit]Spotchecked this version. Decided to hit every source at least once:
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would prefer this moved to the claim it backs up, He was briefly appointed... - also applies to the first paragraph of the article body
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Less of a source problem but I noticed it now: Mellor continued to publish works related to English poetry and literature - move this mention of the Hubert book up in the paragraph, currently we go from 1982, 1992, to 1963 and second
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Discussion
[edit]Ping me if I haven't posted again within 7 days (lord help me if that happens) ~Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 21:27, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
Prose check done, see comments above; expect source checks today or tomorrow but the article looks to be in great shape! ~Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 00:02, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Bluecrystal004: Added a fair use image and responded to all your prose fixes. Thank you very much so far for your work! 15:28, 29 May 2024 (UTC) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 15:28, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: Spotcheck done, let me know those couple points are addressed then this will easily pass. Thanks for your work on this article! ~Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 02:43, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Bluecrystal004: Fixed those two little issues. :) Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 20:04, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Generalissima: Spotcheck done, let me know those couple points are addressed then this will easily pass. Thanks for your work on this article! ~Bluecrystal004 (talk · contribs) 02:43, 31 May 2024 (UTC)