Talk:Ben Edwards (American football)
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ben Edwards (American football)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:11, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
Going to take the time to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 09:11, 14 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- It is broad in its coverage.
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- It is stable.
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- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Early years
[edit]- "Bay Rivers District his junior year in 2008." - Bay River District during his junior year in 2008
Done
- "He sat out the second half of his senior season due to an injury." - do we know what type of injury Edwards suffered?
- @MWright96: Guess we didn't do this. The source that said he missed the second half of the season was misleading. I can only find proof of him missing two games and he also played in the playoffs. I altered the text. Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Yes it looks good enough. Only point that I make is the way you have added the work in the three new references. You should be consistent in how you present them throughout the article. MWright96 (talk) 07:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Guess we didn't do this. The source that said he missed the second half of the season was misleading. I can only find proof of him missing two games and he also played in the playoffs. I altered the text. Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- "He averaged 14.0 points and 5.4 assists per game his junior year," - Edwards averaged 14.0 points and 5.4 assists per game in his junior year
Done
College career
[edit]- "He played in ten games, starting five, his freshman season in 2010," - He played in ten games, starting ten of them, throughout his freshman season in 2010,
Done
- Wikilink touchdown the first time it is mentioned
Done
- "He appeared in eleven games, starting ten, in 2011, recording 44 receptions for 509 yards and six touchdowns. Edwards earned CAA All-Academic accolades in 2011." - reword these two sentences to read In 2011, Edwards appeared in eleven games, of which he started ten, recording 44 receptions for 509 yards and six touchdowns. He earned CAA All-Academic accolades the same year.
Done
- "Edwards rushed for 117 yards on sixteen attempts in 2012 as well." - that same year
Done
- Would suggest that you spell out ACL or wikilink it
Done
Professional career
[edit]- Hyphenate "three day"
Done
- Be consistent on whether you hypenate "minicamp" or not
Done
- "He reverted to injured reserve on May 10, 2016." - He reverted to injured reserve the following day
Done
Personal life
[edit]- "Aaron, played quarterback" - played as a quarterback
Done
On hold until these copy-edits have been made. Feel free to discuss if you differ. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Now you have addressed all the queries that have been made, I can now close the review and promote this to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:00, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
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