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"In Disney’s 1991 animated film Beauty and the Beast, the fictional character Belle wears an opulent dress during the ballroom scene in which she dances with the Beast to the film's titular theme song. The dress is a golden off-the-shoulder ball gown with a voluminous skirt." → "In the ballroom scene from Disney's 1991 animated film Beauty and the Beast during which the fictional character Belle dances with the Beast to the film's titular song, Belle wears an opulent golden off-the-shoulder ball gown with a voluminous skirt."
It is more accurate to say the title song is performed by Angela Lansbury, who voices Mrs. Potts, than that it is performed by the fictional character
Thank you, but I have to disagree. In the context of the scene the paragraph is describing, the character Mrs. Potts is performing the song, not Angela Lansbury.--Changedforbetter (talk) 04:40, 2 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"in 1998, specifically making the costume sexier and more revealing" → "in 1998, with alterations designed to make the costume sexier and more revealing"
Cut superfluous and confusing "despite contemplating making it dissimilar to the original at times" – we know that she wanted to make non-color alterations, but the way the sentence is set up makes it sound like she both did and did not contemplate changing said color
Hey Changedforbetter, just wanted to get a status update on this. On December 9, you said it would take about two weeks, and it's been a little over three. Happy to hold this open for longer with more communication, just let me know. — GhostRiver16:55, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi GhostRiver and Happy New Year! Thank you so much for following up. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to come back to working on this review; unfortunately, I've recently lost access to my home/main computer shortly after I requested that this be put on pause, which has basically put a stop to my Wikipedia editing entirely for the time being. However, I am expected to have a new computer before the end of this month. If you are at all able to extend the hold until the end of the month, I would greatly appreciate it; please let me know.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:07, 3 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
GhostRiver Hello, thank you for your patience; pleased to say that I've finally addressed all of your comments and made changes accordingly. Awaiting final verdict, at your earliest convince. --Changedforbetter (talk) 19:19, 9 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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