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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 4, 2014Good article nomineeListed
September 20, 2014Peer reviewReviewed
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Believe in Me (Bonnie Tyler song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 20:07, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Will review within 48 hrs.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:08, 1 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

My sincerest thanks for reviewing this article, Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:47, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Lead
  • You don't need to place citations in the lead. Only for strong claims, if anything "The single received mixed reviews from music critics, and the song was largely blamed for Tyler's mediocre final score in the Eurovision Song Contest Final. " should be sourced rather than the others.
 Done Sorted, I noticed that one sentence was exclusive to the lead so I paraphrased it below the lead (the fact that she recorded the song in Nashville). Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:38, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Composition
  • "Welsh singer Paul Child conducted in interview with Desmond Child in Nashville " "an interview?"
 Done Seems to have been a typo, sorry! Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:40, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Critical review
  • "Robert Copsey from Digital Spy gave the song 2 stars out of five," -why is one in numerals and the other in words?
 Done Both are now words and not digits, I think it reads better. Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:42, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Music video

This section is very short, can't you perhaps merge into one of the other sections?

 Done You're right - there's not many sources online that discuss the music video in detail so there wasn't much to write for it. I've moved it to the 'background and release' section. Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:44, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Eurovision
  • Shouldn't you mention which nation she represented, even if obvious? representing the UK at the Eurovision and link should suffice. Should mention it in the lead too I think.
 Done I have added the nation name to all places where it was missing. It was already in the lead though, unless you want me to re-phrase that part, which I will be happy to do. Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:45, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The song was staged with Tyler stood by a mic " can you add the formal word microphone here?
 Done Bonnietylersave (talk) 14:46, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, can you just add the publisher to ref 30 too? Some of the youtube sources you should also really cite the original publisher and state "accessed via YouTube".♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:48, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Good job, looks adequate for GA.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:46, 4 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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