Talk:Beautiful Liar/GA1

GA Review

only publications need to be italicized in the references
- I am using {{Cite news}} and {{Cite web}} templates and normally entries in the work parameter are formatted as italics, be it publications or not. --Efe (talk) 09:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Most of these are not works; they are publishers. Gary King (talk) 20:14, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Can you please site some? I am having trouble in identifying which is which. Thanks. --Efe (talk) 09:25, 27 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      - Univision, MTV News, and British Broadcasting Corporation should not be italicized, to name a few. Gary King (talk) 01:43, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
common words like "American", "English", "Spanish" don't need to be linked
- Delinked. --Efe (talk) 09:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"2007 MTV Video Music Award in 2007" – kind of redundant?
- Tighten. --Efe (talk) 09:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Best-selling British Song" – add quotes around it to clarify that this is the award's name, otherwise the uppercase "Best" seems a bit out of place
- I think it is fine. Adding quotation marks depends on the writer's style. Just tell me if it really needs the punctuation, Ill put. --Efe (talk) 09:30, 26 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Gary King (talk) 06:54, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think I have addressed all your concerns. Thank you. --Efe (talk) 11:59, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The paragraph with "On February 27, 2007, "Beautiful Liar"" needs a reference. Gary King (talk) 16:07, 29 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Can a reference be added at the end of every paragraph (except the lead and information such as the description for the music video) just to make it perfectly clear that all of the information in the article is referenced? Gary King (talk) 03:57, 1 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All are sourced. Except those raised above, but were removed already. --Efe (talk) 03:07, 2 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Can you give the article another copyedit?

"Knowles confirmed their duet" – "Knowles confirmed her duet"?
"she had met Shakira several times at various awards shows over the recent years, " – "she met Shakira at awards shows over the recent years, "
"difficulties on matching their schedules." – "difficulties matching their schedules."

Etc. Gary King (talk) 15:09, 1 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the third one. I think the other two is fine. --Efe (talk) 03:04, 2 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

It looks good now. Passing. Gary King (talk) 04:43, 2 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]