Talk:Battle of Hochkirch/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:59, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- Austrian army of 80,000 "men" ?
- Prussian army of 30,000–36,000 "men" ?
- "Field" Marshal Leopold Josef Graf Daun fixed
- What is the rank of Frederick the Great? King
- Mention clearly in the lead that Austria has won the war They didn't win the war.
- 7,300 men, 3 flags
lost; lost is redundant
- Section 1;
- Mention Leopold Josef Graf Daun along with his rank fixed
- 80,000-man army -> army of 80,000 men why?
- Mention Frederick's full name along with rank for first mention in prose (not considering the lead) fixed
- Better abbreviate the units from second mention of the same units, for example, Kilometers, take care of this throughout the article fixed
- In frustration; is a bit awkward fixed
- Who is Wolf Frederick von Retzow? Mention his position and rank fixed
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 17:48, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
- Section 2;
- Hochkirch stands on a hilltop -> Hochkirch is a located on a hilltop fixed
- can be seen for miles? What does it mean? fixed
- twenty-eight, - not required fixed
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 18:25, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
- Section 3;
- The east side was the first to be attacked; east side of what? fixed
- 0500 -> 5:00 am per MOS:TIME
- Marshal James Keith -> Keith, per MOS:LASTNAME fixed
- 0600 -> 6:00 am fixed 6:00
- 0700 -> 7:00 amfixed
- rank of Francis of Brunswick-Wolfenbüttel? Prince fixed
- 0730 -> 7:30 amfixed
- 0900 -> 9:00 amfixed
- 1000 -> 10:00 amfixed
- Section 4;
- approximately 8.3 percent, 3.6 percent; both these redundant, remove them
- In the 4th para, the information on James Keith, about his sister, his grief etc. are out of context for the article. Cut short it.
- shortened.
- Section 5; all good
- Images;
- "Frederick lost approximately 30% of his army." in the caption of File:Frederick the Great after the Battle of Hochkirch in 1758 by Carl Röchling.jpg is unnecessary fixed
- 4.8% confidence, violation unlikely
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 07:58, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:24, 17 February 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: