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I've addressed the style points (espied, assessed, rascals etc.). Off the top of my head, I'm not sure that Desmond was detained in London from 1565 to 1573 - did he spend time in Munster prior to the first Desmond Rebellion?--shtove13:14, 6 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Unregistered user gave this reason: added the confusing tag because there's an inconsistent use of personal/family/dynasty names that makes this impossible to follow. Fair point? I suppose a territorial map of Munster would also help. But this is Irish history - if it were simple, we wouldn't be interested.--Shtove20:49, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]