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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 15:04, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:44, 27 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@AKS.9955: You appear to be inactive since January 2016. I will seek help at WP:WikiProject India. If there is no response within a week from now, I would be forced to fail this nomination. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Citations are typically excluded from the lead unless controversial statements are involved
  • Ensure that all facts in the lead are also mentioned in the main text
  • 400 meters South-West Convert template needed twice in this line. Say "southwest"
  • village Khairpur No italics needed

History

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  • constructed in 1490 Say AD/BC
  • It's construction It's means "it is". Write "Its"
  • Add a word on who Sikandar Lodi was
  • tells the date "gives" is better than "tells"
  • During the rule of Sikander Lodhi Why link him again? Also, you are referring to him differently now.
  • Say Lodi or Lodhi
  • inaugurated by Lady Willingdon Who was she?

Construction and architecture

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  • The platform measures 30 metres (98 ft) (East-West) and 25 metres (82 ft) (North-South) No caps needed for the directions.
  • Duplicate link: Shisha Gumbad
  • A string of citations is not needed unless the claims are very strong (WP:OVERCITE). I would recommend using at most three in each case.

Location

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  • No italics for Khairpur.

These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 11:12, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: I've addressed these issues. utcursch | talk 20:09, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for resolving the issues. I believe the article can be promoted now. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 08:18, 2 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]