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Essence of agreement?

I see that this page is quite new and thank those who created it. However at the moment all I learn is that the agreement is "historic" and has a bit to do with reducing subsidies and lowering barriers. All good I suppose, but the article could benefit from a summary of what exactly has been agreed, when it goes into effect etc. Or a link to such a summary. Anyone? Thanks. 72.208.148.85 (talk) 17:56, 7 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

If you can find such detailed reports in the press, please link them here. --hydrox (talk) 23:36, 7 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

agreed, this article needs the 10 decisions immediately Billyshiverstick (talk) 04:06, 9 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

OK, what are "the 10 decisions"? It sounds like a WP procedure, but nothing shows up when searching help. Max Hyre (talk) 15:44, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The reference at the end of the sentence has them (today as ref 10; like here)… L.tak (talk) 20:32, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Weak Article, plese define what is meant by liberalizm bacause if it is neo its a rebranded slave trade. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.241.190.163 (talk) 22:03, 10 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Liberal POV

"The package includes provisions for lowering import tariffs and agricultural subsidies, making it easier for developing countries to compete with the developed world in global markets."

This sentence has a clear economic liberal viewpoint. Who can guarantee these countries will really be more competitive? There are some schools of thought that disagree on this notion; to cite a few: protectionism, developmentalism and economic nationalism. I changed the wording to make it clear that this is a POV, but this was reverted. Some feedback on it would be good. Pikolas (talk) 00:01, 14 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It might be helpful if you could cite sources, which are not thinking these provisions (if in force) will make competition easier as those three seem to be a bit ambiguous in this particular case… But adding different viewpoints is certainly a good idea! L.tak (talk) 20:09, 14 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not going to "take sides" on whether this is liberal or not, but it seems clear to me that the sentence consists of two parts: (1) The package includes provisions for lowering import tariffs and agricultural subsidies, (2) making it easier for developing countries to compete with the developed world in global markets. The first part is a statement presumably of fact about the provisions, while the second part is more of a promise, interpretation, or opinion. It is as if I said "the new law sets the minimum wage at $100 an hour" followed by "and this will make us all rich!" The latter part is the marketing material, and probably doesn't belong in an encyclopedia, at least not cast as though it were revealed truth. If you said "proponents claim this will make it easier..." followed by a reference to that claim, I might find it appropriate, since there would be room for an opposing POV "opponents however state...". 72.208.148.85 (talk) 00:41, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, that's precisely my point. Pikolas (talk) 23:07, 17 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I understand where the IP is coming from, but note that all references I read make the link between lowering import tariffs and easy of market access for developing countries. For sure the first part of the sentence is more definite, but if the second part seems to be an non-disputed truth in reliable sources, then we shouldn't make this something of "proponents"…. I challenge you both to find reliable sources doubting the relationship in this specific case; so we can have a proper inclusion of the possibly existing minority view opponent. L.tak (talk) 01:30, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I think the WTO see any trade as a positive thing. Lowering import tariffs and agricultural subsidies will make it easier to trade, and maybe the WTO really does want the 'developing' countries to compete. Whether these measures are good for the countries' overall economies and will put them on a level footing is the bit that remains to be proven. How do people feel about the follow rendition:

"The package includes provisions for lowering import tariffs and agricultural subsidies, with the intention of making it easier for developing countries to trade with the developed world in global markets."Jonpatterns (talk) 12:43, 18 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

no problem with that formulation... L.tak (talk) 22:41, 19 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@L.tak: The fact that the sources are making this link only explicits their own bias. This isn't 'truth', it's a very particular point of view that serves to justify and legitimise this deal (a position Wikipedia should not be endorsing). And like I said above, other schools of thought disagree on this 'necessary relationship' between liberalisation and competitiveness. When markets are opened, the local industry may become more competitive, but it also may just die out as it fails to compete with bigger players. Pikolas (talk) 20:46, 19 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

but what's virtually undisputed, is that import barriers of rich countries, disturb market entrance of parties from developing countries.... I agree there is discussion regarding the statement "competition is always good; as it will make people more focussed" etc, but that's not what's debated; it is about lowering import tarifs by mostly rich countries and its effect on developing countries... Or am I seeing something wrong? L.tak (talk) 22:39, 19 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I see your point, but I'm not entirely convinced. I do favour @Jonpatterns's phrasing, though. Pikolas (talk) 03:12, 20 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I've going to go ahead and update the page will the proposed rewording as people seem to prefer it. I'm also going to expand on the provisions agreed. Jonpatterns (talk) 18:22, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Good idea; time to implement what seems to be the consensus indeed. If anyone finds sources specifically criticizing the package from this POV in Reliable Sources, such info would also be very welcome to be added! L.tak (talk) 18:47, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Financial Estimates

Moving second paragraph from introduction into its own section. Jonpatterns (talk) 18:22, 22 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 03 July 2014

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The result of the move request was: page moved. Armbrust ^{The Homunculus} 10:03, 12 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Bali Accord → Bali Package – In July the page Bali Package was moved to Bali Accord. This discussion serves to evaluate if there was consensus for this move, or that it should be moved back to its original location.... L.tak (talk) 07:31, 5 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose move to "Accord", Support return to "Package". The ministerial declaration of WTO on Bali called it Bali Package, as well as reliable sources like Deusche Welle, FAO, the Guardian and the European Parliament, to name just a few. The term Bali Accord is also used, most notably by a recent UNCTAD source, but I have no indications it became the formal name (UNCTAD uses Bali Trade Facilitation Agreement), nor is it the common name (Google hit numbers are far from authoritive, but Bali Package does have 40 (!) time more of them...)... A mve to "Accord was thus not justified... L.tak (talk) 07:31, 5 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This is a contested technical request (permalink). Anthony Appleyard (talk) 05:35, 4 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I concur with L.tak. Pikolas (talk) 11:29, 5 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Support return to "Package" per L.tak. Bali Package is the common name. Good Ol’factory ^(talk) 01:22, 8 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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