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IMPROVEMENTS NEEDED FOR WP:GA

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Languages Section

  • Andreas Katsulas does not use a British accent in playing G'Kar. It's more correct to call that "standard English" or "mid-Atlantic English."

Religion Section

  • The Jesuits are not a different religion. They are a religious order of men (ie. priests, deacons and brothers) within the Catholic Church.

Well written

  • Weak Pass.
    • Further improve: Work on overall flow. The sections do not gel well with each other as a single article. Transitions need to be better. Too many lists that could be broken off or turned into prose. Subcategories should be parallel in format. Done

Factually Accurate

Broad Coverage

  • Passed. Many strengths.
    • Further improve: More on international reception.

NPOV

  • Passed.

Stable

  • Passed.

Appropriate Images

  • Passed.
    • Further improve: Caption quality needs to be consistent. "Another shot of the Babylon 5 station" is inadequate being that the largest object in the photo is a planet of some sort which is unidentified. Done

Real-world context for articles dealing with fiction

  • Failed. Too fan centric:
    • "Cast and primary characters" section: List should be Actor, Character (not other way around). The real-world context is an actor played a character (encyclopedia) - not the character was brought to life by an actor (fansite). Done Koweja 18:50, 13 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Babylon stations" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series. Done --Angelstorm 10:55, 15 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • "Ethnicity and language of characters" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series Section Removed
    • "Usage of English" section: Reads like the fictional universe is real. Needs real-world context for readers who are unfamiliar with the series Section Removed

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