Talk:Art's Auto/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:22, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"stands on a triangular lot and intersected by Main Street and Lonsdale Avenue," rm and
"This attempt to revitalize and preserve historic sites was not unique, more than 4000 such organizations existed by 1977 to re-use or save the site from destruction" The way it's written makes it sound like 4,000 organizations sprang up to help Art's Auto, rather than historical preservation in general; reword.
"has continued to retain its the historic features" rm the

Article on hold, will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 03:07, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Wizardman - Thanks and good catch with the "site" instead of "sites", but I also rectified it by clarifying this as a local attempt amidst the 4,000+ organizations nationwide. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:26, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Article reads better there now, so it now passes GA status. Wizardman 03:10, 18 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]