Talk:Arizona State Route 89A/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough 48 72 02:18, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
The sentence "It continued past Tuzigoot National Monument, becoming Main Street in Cottonwood, providing access to Dead Horse Ranch State Park and intersecting Cottonwood Street where the bypass route now intersects Main Street." is very long and needs to be broken up. Is there a reason the mileposts start at 0.43 and the end milepost is greater than the length of the route? This difference should either be explained or corrected. In addition, the exit numbers in the major intersections should be in their own column per WP:RJL. In addition, non-breaking spaces should be added throughout the article.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
The first two paragraphs of the Jerome to Sedona section need references.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Can a little more detail be added to the lead? Can some more details about the physical surroundings be added to the route description? What kind of development does it pass in the towns it serves? What portions of the roads pass through forests or deserts? In the history, could some details for the upgrading of the part of the road into I-17 be provided?
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

I am placing the article on hold to allow for fixes. Dough 48 72 02:18, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

So far I have split the sentence and added references to the unreferenced paragraph. I'll try to get to the other issues as soon as possible.--P C B 21:35, 14 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I've added some sentences to the lead and added information about physical surroundings.--P C B 05:14, 15 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Can a reference be added about the upgrading to I-17? In addition, can the creation date of the route be added to the infobox? In addition, the exit numbers in the JL still need to be moved from the notes column to a new exit number column. Dough 48 72 21:08, 15 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think I fixed all of these. --P C B 02:10, 17 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I will now pass the article. Dough 48 72 02:20, 17 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]