Talk:Archibald Spencer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "as a businessman".

•  Done

• What is the purpose of the Edinburgh image?

•  Done Removed.

• "Edinburgh, Scotland, Adam" - split these sentences

•  Done

• "and a male midwife and" - repetitive use of "and"

•  Done

• Boston Evening Post → Boston Evening-Post

•  Done

• Wikilink The Boston Weekly Post-Boy

•  Done

• the Boston Weekly Post-Boy →The Boston Weekly Post-Boy

•  Done

• the Pennsylvania Gazette → The Pennsylvania Gazette

•  Done

• "metallic fragments move" → "metallic fragments to move"

•  Done

• Add a comma after "after that".

•  Done

• Can #Religion be merged with #Death as #Personal_life_and_death?

•  Done

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:58, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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