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WikiProject iconThis article was copy edited by Phibeatrice, a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on 3 January 2025.

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Hello! I'm going to be reviewing this page. Please let me know if you have any questions, concerns, or other considerations. Phibeatrice (talk) 00:27, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I've completed a few rounds of edits, with specific attention to addressing typos, punctuation, grammar, flow, and readability. I also added some citations where helpful, as well as one citation needed tag for a claim that I couldn't verify with any of the existing sources. Finally, I standardized date formatting to MDY for the article, as there was some inconsistency there.
For what it's worth, I wonder if there are too many sub-headings in the article considering that most of them only have a few sentences or, at most, one paragraph under them. I think the "History" heading can suffice with just "Original location" and "Second location" or "New location," whereas the "Design" heading maybe doesn't need any sub-headings at all given its length. Since that might be beyond my purported purview as a copy editor, however, I have refrained from making giant changes in that regard—instead, I leave it here as a suggestion.
Thanks for the article! It was interesting. Phibeatrice (talk) 01:10, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]