Talk:Anurag Kashyap/GA1
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Reviewer: Kailash29792 (talk · contribs) 14:42, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
I'll post my comments within 24 hours. Kailash29792 (talk) 14:42, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- "After writing few news paper articles and a television serial" - Please rephrase. For which paper did he write, and which TV serial?
- The TV serial is Kabhie Kabhie, its mentioned below. I should remove "few news paper articles", because found it in a video on youtube, where he mentions this.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 9:37, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
- "Paanch, which is yet unreleased regarding censorship issues" - But the film did get a screening at some festival per this source.
- The film has been screened at a film festival, but haven't been theatrically released.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 9:37, 11 May 2015 (UTC)
- The lead section needs no sources. But the same content must be sourced in the body.
- Where I should include this line "He has received acclaim.."? Because its the only line which is sourced.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 6:41, 20 May 2015 (UTC)
- "He has received acclaim for his often realistic films, and is regarded as the face of an emerging new wave cinema for producing numerous independent films with newcomers.[1][2][3]" - this statement, along with its sources, may fit either in "accolades" or "influences". But it can remain in the lead without sources.Kailash29792 (talk) 01:13, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
- Done.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 6:23, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
Background and career
[edit]- Does any other GA/FA use a title like this? If not, please try and split it. Because it looks absurd.
- Done.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 6:17, 20 May 2015 (UTC)
- "On January 16, 2015, it was released in United States on selected theatres" - Gangs of Wasseypur part 1 or 2? Or both?
- Rephrased.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 6:31, 20 May 2015 (UTC)
- this section appears too over-detailed and convoluted; can you try adding sub-headings? Kailash29792 (talk) 13:51, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
- Done.--Yashthepunisher (talk) 6:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
I have checked the whole article, seems well written. In its current state, the article is worth passing. Kailash29792 (talk) 06:40, 1 June 2015 (UTC)