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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]


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Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "strengthened by calcareous and other materials," I think "calcerous" is an adjective, so I'd say replace it with "calcium carbonate"
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Diversity section, it sounds like the Octocorallia and Hexacorallia have already been discussed, but they haven't yet. Generally I like to put the phylogeny first to bring up all the broad overview stuff, and then move on into more specific branches later   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  04:32, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The wikilinking business is difficult. I have removed some links that were duplicates and added some where the terms first appeared, but I have left some like "taxon" and "taxa", "symbiosis" and "symbiotic", "Antipatharia" and "black coral", and in the tables because I think they are needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:26, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I can't complete it because Google Books is restricting which pages I can access. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Because it is an important order of stony corals and is mentioned in the classification given above. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
But why is it more important than all the other Paleozoic anthozoans?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  17:34, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Well the classification in the "Phylogeny" section is referenced to WoRMS and that recognises Rugosa as a valid taxon but not Tabulata or Heliolitida. I will remove "Rugosa" if you like. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
No it's fine, I was just wondering   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  19:14, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • ref no. 32 has a doi 10.1017/S1089332600000073
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:15, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • you might want to be consistent on how you form the access dates (like choose between 24-7-17 and 24 July 2017)
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:22, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't know what to do about that so I replaced the image. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:11, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:58, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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