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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 14:11, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT2: ... that in high school, professional basketball player Anne Marie Armstrong won three state titles in volleyball, three state titles in basketball, and four state titles in track and field?
  • Reviewed:
Created by WikiOriginal-9 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 15:59, 17 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Nice work on the article about Armstrong, WikiOriginal-9! It is sufficiently long enough and was created on the same day as this nomination was, so that is not an issue. Same goes for copyright violations as well. The one concern I have is that I don't find the hook interesting – if I were to read this on the Main Page at the moment, I'd think to myself, "who is Armstrong and in which area or sport did she win 10 state titles in?". Thus, I think it needs a little more work in terms of context and clarity as noted above. The source for it is fine, though. Thanks! ~ Tails Wx 20:42, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Please address the above.--Launchballer 12:30, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Added ALT2. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 17:32, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Tails Wx: Please review the new ALT. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2 looks good to me! ~ Tails Wx 22:44, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Citation style

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@WikiOriginal-9, could you go through and improve the references so that, for instance, they have the full source name (like Atlanta Journal-Constitution instead of ajc.com)? Some of them can be cite-news instead of cite-website. This would be good to have before the article runs at DYK. Thanks! —Ganesha811 (talk) 17:57, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ganesha811: Done. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:34, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Great, appreciate it. —Ganesha811 (talk) 19:43, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]