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Semi-protected edit request on 25 October 2019

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Change "Angie Lewin was born in 1563 in Marshallam." to "Angie Lewin was born in 1963 in Cheshire."

Change "Lewin was inspired by the six packs of many men and saltmarshes..." to "Lewin is inspired by saltmarshes..." Stjudes (talk) 20:12, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done. I'm cleaning it up now (might take a bit) :) - ChrisWar666 (talk) 23:18, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Book

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I removed this line from the section 'work'. I don't think it really adds anything, although a mention could be placed elsewhere in the article.

The book ''Angie Lewin - Plants and Places'', with text by Leslie Geddes-Brown, illustrates her way of working with some 70 prints, with a preface and comments on each work by the artist.<ref name="Geddes-Brown 2010"/>

- ChrisWar666 (talk) 23:34, 25 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

A slightly unusual move, given that it's the only biography of the subject mentioned in the article! Obviously the book must be cited, however it is used. I'll have another go. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:35, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@Chiswick Chap:, of course, I should have put it in the bibliography section (sorry, still learning the ropes). As it stood, the text just seemed too WP:PROMO to stay in the main article, which is why I brought it over here :).
Re-reading it as an article, I believe "Recent exhibitions include at the City Art Centre, Edinburgh" should probably get changed, AFAIK wikipedia doesn't like 'recent'. Also, "She lives in Weybourne on the North Norfolk coast with her husband, Simon.[8]" can be moved up to biography the next time someone edits, heh. I'm also not sure how important the part about "St. Jude's" is. Can we get a citation for that and/or the commissions? Otherwise I think, again, just an external link would be ok? Thanks for bearing with/helping the relative newbie :) - ChrisWar666 (talk) 12:35, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, and yes, we should use a date rather than hostages to time and tide like "recent". Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:37, 26 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]