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I have removed the statement "She recently appeared in a report in the Wilts and Glos Standard concerned about increasing rural crime." from the lead section as a) It is unsourced b) it does not seem to be particularly relevant or encyclopedic material c) "recently" is rather vague d) This does not seem like information that would be expected to be in a lead section. For the moment I have left in the statement "She is now living in the Cotswolds", but I am a) concerned about the lack of a source for this b) unsure that even if sourced it would not be better elsewhere in the article (eg after the section dealing with her service as an MP). Dunarc (talk) 21:41, 19 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]