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GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 04:19, 28 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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  • No DAB links checkY
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Discussion

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Prose Suggestions

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Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

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  • I've made some copy edits, feel free to revert any of them.
  • John and Andronikos ruled Thessalonica with the full imperial title, suggest John and Andronikos ruled Thessalonica with the full imperial title of Byzantine emperor,
Changed to "full Byzantine imperial title" rather than "title of Byzantine emperor" since the title they used wasn't Byzantine emperor.
  • with John VII previously believed to have been childless. suggest who had previously believed John VII to be childless.
Changed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Life

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  • John VII had briefly ruled the Byzantine Empire in 1390, through usurping the throne from his grandfather suggest John VII had briefly ruled the Byzantine Empire in 1390, after usurping the throne from his grandfather
Changed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • and facing the risk of civil war, suggest and risking civil war
Changed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Identification

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  • I'd suggest changing this section title to Historiography
Yeah, "Historiography" fits better. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Dennis based his argument for Andronikos' existence mainly on two until then unpublished suggest changing until then to previously
Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • explicitly identifying the dead child as an emperor by the name of Andronikos, son of John VII, who died seven years old suggest expliclity identifying the name, father, and age of the child, as well as confirming that he was emperor.
Changed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • varies between authors suggest changing authors to sources
Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are only few exceptions suggest There are some exceptions
Changed. Ichthyovenator (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]